Melody Redesign

Revamped Melody's look. I honestly had her as just a clone of Charlemagne with black hair. Now that I'm a better artist I decided to use what I know to improve her look to have her look related to Charlemagne while having traits of her own. 
Also revamped her background: 

Name: Melody

Age: 27

Gender: Female

Sexuality: asexual

Faction: S.T.O.R.M ((returned recently from a research trip))

Position: Zoologist/Researcher/Scientist

Appearance: Melody is 5”4’, usually wearing heels like Charlemagne to try and get an intimidation factor going on. She prefers to wear turtlenecks to cover up the whip scar around her neck. Melody’s hair is naturally black, a recessive gene in her family, and she usually keeps it in a bun. Like her older sister Charlemagne, Melody has a resting bitch face with piercing amber eyes.

Personality: Jon, who once dated Melody, can only describe her personality as “a rock”. That is not necessarily a bad thing due to her most of the time being the rock in her older sister’s storms back when he and Jeredy worked with S.T.O.R.M. Melody tends to show very little emotion. The woman has the patience of a saint and can even withstand Bren or Chase yapping at her for long periods of time. She’s incredibly no nonsense and blunt with most people.

Other: Melody once held a sort of hero worship for her older sister, Charlemagne. The young woman followed her orders down to a T for a long time. Melody defected only when Charlemagne began to be consumed by her power. The younger sister did not want Charlemagne to kill Core-Tech and believed Jeredy’s theories of the Earth being doomed. Their arguments eventually turned into a full blown fight. It ended when Charlemagne wrapped her whip around Melody’s throat and began to strangle her.

Jon soon called Melody back to the main base after becoming Commandant Marshal. He felt the need to surround himself with allies to ensure his safety against the unknown amount of those that wished Charlemagne has stuck around. Melody took the offer, but does not speak much with her other family members nor does she visit her imprisoned sister.

Weapon: Prefers to use her Monsuno, Rocket, a hybrid of a star-nosed mole and a hyena.